My New Habitat - By Caitlin

My New Habitat!

Dear Diary,
ERRMAGHEERD! You will never ever believe what happened yesterday! I was just doing my thing, eating the leaves off the tree... When suddenly I heard footsteps approaching me. The next thing I knew, a man ran up to me with a sharp pokey thingy and poked me in the ribs. Suddenly I collapsed onto the dirt and bark!

When I woke up I rubbed my eyes it was all blurred, I couldn't see anything, so I shook my head. I thought I was dreaming, I was so squashed I was in a box. My legs were nearly over my head. I got sore and tired of getting squashed so I went to sleep. A few minutes later (It felt like 2 minutes) I woke up. I was in a bright light.

The first thing I did was look up, I had no words to say... There was everything I loved trees, and more trees and water I had no idea where I was but I loved it.

But I also really missed my parents; sometimes I wonder if I would ever see them again. All of a sudden I heard a laugh I sounded like my Mum. I thought it was a joke but I heard it again, I looked across the cage and I saw my Mum and Dad. I yelled out to them "MUM DAD!!!" once we saw each other we were so happy. We talked for a while. We both loved our new habitat.

By Caitlin 

 


Comments

  1. Hi Caitlin. Your story is amazing. I liked the way you said ERRMAGHEERD! You will never ever believe what happened yesterday! That hooked me in to read your story. Is this a dream you had or did you make it up?
    From Rau

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    1. Hi Rau, B4 are learning about habitats. So our class made a story up about getting kidnapped from their natural habitat
      From Caitlin B4

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  2. Hi Caitlin you have a beutiful story. I could amagin it in my head.is that real or fake

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