Elephant Diary - BY MIKE




DEAR DIARY

 WOW! You won't believe this, guys.
Yesterday My parents were gone somewhere, and I was just playing with no one, when suddenly I heard a big BANG, it was very loud. When it stopped I couldn't hear anything at all, except a ringing sound in my ears.



 A man had a shot gun and it had a dart in it, he shot the dart at my neck and it felt like purple juice that made me dizzy and sleepy... I fell to the ground. 

Then I woke up in a new place. I felt sad and lonely and then the zoo keeper came and took me to another habitat, there I saw my mum and dad and i was so glad  i saw  my family  and we went to    a lot   of things  today and we done every thing the hole day .

Comments

  1. B731 July 2017 at 14:17

    i like this mike

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  2. Anonymous1 August 2017 at 15:36

    Hi Mike. I like your story, its so cool. It reminds me of the movie the Planet of the Apes.By the way have you watched the movie Planet of the Apes?I have seen it and it was pretty good.
    By Sophia

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  3. Anonymous1 August 2017 at 15:44

    Hi Mike
    Loved reading your story. I've been to the zoo and I saw elephants there.
    Why did you call it Elephant diary?
    By Kenny

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  4. B72 August 2017 at 14:30

    thank you

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