namaratas story

The Abandoned House
By Namrata Chand
Chapter 1
Long ago there were some friends Tintin, Abigale, Caitlin, Alisha, Jalierus, Peter, Devine, Mike, Veronika, Carlsen, Maranique, Violet, Tynan and Namrata (me)
One day Tintin, Tynan and Peter decided to go to an abanded house that was so scary and Tintin asked “Are you guys gonna come?” but everyone said “no” except for Peter and Tintin so then Peter said “Ha you a bunch of babies come Tintin looks like we’re gonna have to leave these babies outside and no one knows what will happen to them ”then Tintin said yeah what if they get kidnaped or killed he” then Peter and Tintin went in and then everyone fearfully followed.
When they went in the house the wind was roaring and at the same time “owwwwwwww ow ow owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww” a wolf
Howled, everyone got so scared except for Tintin and Peter.  Then Alisha said, “I think this isn’t a good Idea we should go back now” but then Peter said, “Oh stop being such babies are you guys big kids or little?” Abigale said, “Fine I’ll come”. “Good” said, Tintin.
Part 2 is coming soon so be ready!!!!!!!!!!

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