My Worst Day Ever!! Or is it??

Dear Diary............

You would NOT BELIEVE WHAT HAPPENED YESTERDAY!! I got kidnapped
from these stupid little rats, while I was sleeping and had the best dream ever!! Uh, I knew they were kidnappers because I could hear nets tangled, guns, and growly voices. Then I blacked out.
Suddenly I woke up in this mysterious in this mysterious mini van with this rope around my mouth, that made me have no oxygen. After that, this ugly hideous monster with a hairy body and had a giant net to capture me NOOOOOOOOO!! Then their was more all I could taste was my sweat dripping down into my mouth YUK!! It tasted salty. Next they put me in this dark suspicious room with no water no food or I'm saying OR FAMILY😢😢
In a little bit of time I heard these big footsteps STOMP STOMP SSSSTTTTOOOOMMMPPP!!! then there was a streak from the door and i was frightened because I felt like it was a giant but when it opened and it was a................
Happy mouse with food to give me and I realised the big footsteps were his bear guards!! I said " why am I here?" he said "because I don't want you to get heart from those other people HUMANS?" but I said "why did I have a rope around my mouth " he replied "because i needed you to stay calm before I gave you the food!" he said Ohhh that's why OK, I said. Then he gave me this plate of delicious food with chicken, mashed potato, and some veggies!! Mmmmm yummy. The next day later he said "why don't you live in a proper home with proper family"?? he replied. Then I said "because when I was little no one wanted to see me at the Auckland Zoo and research about me"💧💧💧. Later that day well the little mouse was sleeping I was having a walk in the wild and suddenly this cute, pretty, amazing, human came up to me and said "why are you out here"?? I replied "because no one wanted to have a look at me at the Auckland Zoo" she said "it's OK you can come home with me".
At night the girl had named me PINKY because of my colour and my personality.  

                                                         3 YEARS LATER

I had just came out of hospital from having twin babies and their names are 
Abby and Sophie what i had said to them was WELCOME TO THE FAMILY GIRLS!!
Thanks to the little girl who saved me😀😀

THE END

  Written By: Gaby

Comments

  1. B11 Finlayson Park School6 August 2017 at 19:14

    Katerine,FPS,B11

    Dear Gaby

    Kia Ora! I loved your interesting story that described what you thought in your mind about being kidnapped. I even wanted to drop a few of my tears out.
    Question: Why did you name the twin babies Abby and Sophie?

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  2. B11 Finlayson Park School7 August 2017 at 14:52

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  3. B11 Finlayson Park School8 August 2017 at 17:40

    Maia, FPS, B11
    Hi Gaby, I really liked your story about being kidnapped by the rats. They must be very big rats to be able to kidnap you. How big were they?

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  4. Anonymous27 August 2017 at 14:43

    Namaste Gaby this is a really confusing story but also awesome at the same time and why was it about rats and a mouse? and why are your twins called Abby and Sophie

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  5. Anonymous27 September 2017 at 14:35

    Hi Gaby I really like your story and I really liked meeting you yesterday when we went to your school finlayson park.Were the rats big or small. By Alima

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  6. Anonymous27 September 2017 at 14:45

    Hi Gaby.
    I loved the day at your school.
    My favorite activity was sport because it was funny how people got hit with the ball when they were running.
    By Rosalia(Rosie)

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  7. Anonymous24 October 2017 at 13:21

    Hi Gaby I love your story its sounds scary. What were you dreaming about?By Anne.

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