My new habitat Pearl

Dear Diary,

I was just playing like a lazy ape...
Until I heard a crunchy sound so I went absolutely went quiet.
At the back of me there was a man running up to me and I got caught in a big web with little holes.
I was unconscious in a big van because they  hit me on the head which was really hard!

AAAWWWW!!

I woke up in a weird  place. Big, weird people were looking at me kookily. I felt a man or a lady checking on me and my head.

I thought I was going to die or never see my family again. I was taken somewhere. It was raining outside, they threw me to my new cage with different animals. I really felt sorry for the sad animals that miss their family so much. After a minute they took us to a warmer place where it was not RAINING!

I saw my mum and my dad and I hugged them.

                                   THE END

                                   PEARL PITA 



Comments

  1. Anonymous2 August 2017 at 15:14

    Hi Pearl. I like your comment.Thankyou for sharing this.By Alima

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  2. B11 Finlayson Park School6 August 2017 at 19:42

    F.P.S B11 Rachel
    Hi Pearl, I really liked the part in your story about you hearing the crunchy sound because it reminds me of Kate's story about her crunchy chocolate

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  3. Anonymous28 August 2017 at 14:28

    Hello pearl I like your descriptive writing it may be a short story but its cool ,Did you know that story is familiar its in a movie but i can't remember ,What are the animals that you saw? By Cyrus

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  4. Anonymous18 September 2017 at 15:25

    Hi Pearl I love your comment it may look small but it is amazing.
    what animal do you like.
    By Hosier

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  5. Anonymous24 September 2017 at 14:31

    Hi Pearl
    I loved reading your story.
    I don't have a diary.
    What is your favourite animal?
    By Kenny.

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  6. B725 September 2017 at 13:25

    Hi kenny
    thankyou for your your amazing comment.
    My favorite animal is a Elephant and a Panda.

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  7. B725 September 2017 at 13:30

    Hi Hosier
    thankyou for your comment and my favorite animal is a elephant and a Panda.
    Pearl

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  8. B725 September 2017 at 13:38

    Hi Cyrus
    thankyou for your nice comment.
    The familiar movie was plants of the apes.
    Pearl Pita

    ReplyDelete
  9. B725 September 2017 at 14:53

    Hi Rachel
    thankyou for your comment
    Can't wait to see you

    ReplyDelete

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