Habitat By Aarav

Dear, AJ panther
you won't believe what happen to me yesterday. My mum told me to hide for 20 second. After I close my eyes and waited for 20 second  and this strange hit my back it was a sleeping dart.When I woke up I was in a cage Aah help me they are killing my family. They said they were the Anthony. Then I found you and we look around we got tired so we went to sleep. Then my friend Carlsen the gorilla came to recuse us but he got shot he was taking to a cage a so we made a plan to escape and we told Carlsen our plan then after few years we were going to do our plan we dig a hole in our cage and Work.   

                                                     The End.  

Comments

  1. B11 Finlayson Park School2 August 2017 at 15:43

    B11 FPS Tinatasha
    Hi Aarav I love your imagination it's so creative and would just love it if you wrote more.
    QUESTION:What was your inspiration for this story Aarav?

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  2. Anonymous3 August 2017 at 15:46

    I liked how you said we dig a hole in our cage and work. My favorite part was when you said you won't believe what happen to me yesterday. Is your story true?By Paige

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  3. Anonymous3 August 2017 at 15:46

    I liked how you said we dig a hole in our cage and work. My favorite part was when you said you won't believe what happen to me yesterday. Is your story true?By Paige

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  4. Anonymous3 August 2017 at 15:50

    I liked how you said we dig a hole in our cage and work. That was such a cool story. Is your story?By Paige

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  5. B11 Finlayson Park School7 August 2017 at 15:13

    B11 FPS Jyne'e
    Kia Orana Aarav, your story was very interesting especially the part about your friend Carlsen coming to rescue you.

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  6. Anonymous27 August 2017 at 15:10

    I like your story and I like how you said we dig in the hole and worked.
    I wish I can sleep.

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  7. Anonymous28 August 2017 at 15:39

    Hi Aarav.
    I love your imagination.I liked the way you said When I woke up I was in a cage Aah help me they are killing my family. Would you be an author when you grow up?

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  8. Anonymous15 October 2017 at 14:31

    Hi Aarav
    I loved your story,and how you said when I woke up I as in a cage Aah help me they are killing my family.Did that happen for real ever.
    By:Tupe

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